2 April 2025
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gaby

I love this story, I could see it in my imagination! Congratulations on your blog!

Kathy K. McClellan

What a delightful surprise as I read that last sentence!

Melissa B

Very moving but not sure if I should laugh or cry a little bit…maybe both. Abbie, you are stellar in creating a whole world, that I can always visualize in just a few sentences. Always amazed by what you achieve with just a few words strung together…truly a magical and wonderful gift you have.

Val Arie

Abbie – this is wonderful! What a fun read. This is everything a short story should be!

Edith Dooley

Wonderful writing, Abbie! When the words create pictures in one’s mind, you know the writing is great! Descriptive and attention-getting…kudos!

Sandi O'Reilly

Abbie, read this once before on FB and went back to it again. You created this story like you paint, in colorful scenes that spark the pictures you are creating through your words in our imaginations. This could be true, as pictured Leila as you. These need to be in a book!!!!

Sandi O'Reilly

Abbie, ,moving story, heartwarming words and creative writing. Stirs one’s imagination and pictures you create in one’s mind.

Carlin Blahnik

So well written. Enough detail to bring me in to the story without bogging it down. Loved the ending, well sprung 🙂

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